A heavy hand will result in crushing.
A soft grip will cause a slip.
Equal pressure is the desire;
However, unattainable with these measures.
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I like the contrast of the two grips here and the ambiguity of the word "measures" in the last line.
ReplyDeleteThe rhythm in these lines is also effective.